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#1
Asta Mica
Burnin`up
Postari: 444
Vise spulberate
Aici e vorba despre iubire,prieteni,secrete,minciuni si tradare...o viata de nimic
Sper ca o  sa va placa...iar daca o sa postez cate odata mai rar [lipsa de inspiratie]


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Sweet love..sweet love!Your love...your love...your love will be mine again!<3


 
   
#2
Bellatrixa
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Din: Lumea luatilor razna :]]
Postari: 1944
Asteptam : ) Sunt curioasa : >

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We can make the sun shine in the moonlight .

We can make the gray clouds into blue skies .


 
   
#3
Asta Mica
Burnin`up
Postari: 444
Mah nush ce o sa iasa dar spersa iasa....o sa incerc sa iasa cat mai bine....

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Sweet love..sweet love!Your love...your love...your love will be mine again!<3


 
   
#4
Duxxy Duu
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Din: World Of Dreams
Postari: 21583
asteptam

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Think you'll never do drugs? Wait until it's right there in front of you & all your "friends" are doing it. Think you're tough? Wait until you say the wrong thing to the wrong person - see who backs down first. Think you're cool? Wait until you're the only one who doesn't make the sports team, see how cool you are then. You think you're popular? Wait until your parents can't afford the new Hollister jeans everyone has. Think you'll never fall in love? Wait until a guy looks deep in your eyes & says he loves you. Think you'll never get your heart broken? Wait until that same guy who said he loved you is holding another girl behind your back. Think you won't have sex? Wait until the guy you think you love says it'll make you closer. Think nothing's going to happen to you? Yeah, wait until you're sitting in a jail cell, wondering how you got caught. Think that you're always going to be your own individual? Well, wait until one morning when you look in the mirror & you're just like everybody else.


 
   
#5
Andreea.
Play my music
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Asteptam sa vedem ce o sa iasa care speri sa iasa cat mai bine  [PS:nici eu nu stiu ce am zis ! ]

 
   
#6
Annabella.
Games
Din: Land of FaiRY`TaleS''
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suna interesant! abia astept cap 1 :X

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#7
Asta Mica
Burnin`up
Postari: 444
Sper sa va placa...nu prea le am cu ficurile dar exista un inceput in toate


Alessia-14 ani...bruneta ochi verzi frumoasa eleganta si stilata...o fire sociabila si prietenoasa

Mitza-18 ani prietenul Alessiei...saten spre blond,ochi albastri-verzi....un baiat dulce haios si de treaba

Raluca-14 ani,bf Alessiei...bruneta ochi caprui o fata foarte desteapta si de treaba


Episodul I:
Era o dimineata insorita,era ora 06.45,Alessia se trezeste se imbraca isi face parul,se machiaza se pregateste si pleaca la scoala...
Alessia statea somnoroasa in banca ei...nu ii era ei gandul la ora....se uite prin profu` de istorie care gesticula[gesturi specifice lui]
Mai avea putin si adormea...la un moment dat "Muschiuletz" striga la ea:
-Unde te gandesti domnisoara?La nemurirea sufletului?
-Nu domn profesor...ma scuzati
Raluca incepe sa rada "pe sub mustati"
'Muschiuletz" isi continua ora si Alessia se intoarce in lumea viselor
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Vine ora 1...Alessia iese repede din clasa stiind ca trebuie sa se intalneasca cu Mitza.Iese din clasa si...surpriza...Mitza nu a venit...Ea pleaca suparata si grabita spre casa
Ajungand acasa ii da cateva explicatii mamei sale,intra in camera ei,se schimba si merge la masa.Dupa ce termina de mancat merge la ea in camera unde ramane cateva ore buna[cam pana pe la ora 17]




Sper sa va placa inceputul:*


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Sweet love..sweet love!Your love...your love...your love will be mine again!<3


 
   
#8
Duxxy Duu
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Din: World Of Dreams
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ok deci inceputu imi place . Un sfat : incearca sa descrii mai mult  . De exemplu , cand ai zis ca alexia se intoarce in lumea viselor , puteai sa ne descrii la ce se gandea.. doar punete si tu in pielea personajului ca nu e asa greu .
nu mi`o lua in nume de rau , da` prin critici te perfectionezi :*


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Think you'll never do drugs? Wait until it's right there in front of you & all your "friends" are doing it. Think you're tough? Wait until you say the wrong thing to the wrong person - see who backs down first. Think you're cool? Wait until you're the only one who doesn't make the sports team, see how cool you are then. You think you're popular? Wait until your parents can't afford the new Hollister jeans everyone has. Think you'll never fall in love? Wait until a guy looks deep in your eyes & says he loves you. Think you'll never get your heart broken? Wait until that same guy who said he loved you is holding another girl behind your back. Think you won't have sex? Wait until the guy you think you love says it'll make you closer. Think nothing's going to happen to you? Yeah, wait until you're sitting in a jail cell, wondering how you got caught. Think that you're always going to be your own individual? Well, wait until one morning when you look in the mirror & you're just like everybody else.


 
   
#9
Asta Mica
Burnin`up
Postari: 444
Nu stai chill chiar vreau si critici si laude si pareri si de toate pentru ca vreau sa invat sa le fac cat mai bine..nu prea le am cu chestiile astea[faza e k nici nu prea am scris]dar cum am mai spus exista un inceput in toate

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Sweet love..sweet love!Your love...your love...your love will be mine again!<3


 
   
#10
Asta Mica
Burnin`up
Postari: 444
Episodul II:

Cat timp a stat la ea in camera si`a facut temele,a invatat si bineinteles a ascultat muzica.
Pe la ora 17 s`a plictisit sa stea inchisa in camera si s`a hotarat sa ias ain oras.S`a imbracat cu o pereche de pantaloni negri un pulover lung gri si s`a incaltat cu botinele ei preferate;s`a machiaot si a plecat.
Ea a fcaut o tura de strada singura dupa care si`a sunat nsite prieteni si le`a propus sa iasa undeva.Au mers in barul lor preferat,MM Club,era barul unde lucra mama ei ca barmanita si unde isi pierdea majoritatea timpului.
Au intrat s`au asezat la o masa,ea si`a comandat o apa plata cu lamaie iar prietenii ei o bere.
Alessia nu a fost in apele ei astazi...Nici ea nu stie ce e cu ea...probabil e vina lui Mitza...nu s`au mai vazut de 3 zile si nu au mai vorbit de 3.
Nu stie ce e cu el...are niste feeling`uri ciudate dar nu stie de ce..presimte ceva dar nu e sigura........


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Sweet love..sweet love!Your love...your love...your love will be mine again!<3


 
   
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